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	<title>Comments on: Redress &#8211; This Rewrite is Done!</title>
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	<description>Tales of My Creative Blood, Sweat and Tears</description>
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		<title>By: brozogirl</title>
		<link>http://quitmeyer.com/david/2009/07/redress-this-rewrite-is-done/comment-page-1/#comment-124</link>
		<dc:creator>brozogirl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 15:00:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey David,
 All you can do is keep on truckin&#039;. If you believe in yourself then the rest is easy!!

Thanks,
Carrie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey David,<br />
 All you can do is keep on truckin&#8217;. If you believe in yourself then the rest is easy!!</p>
<p>Thanks,<br />
Carrie</p>
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		<title>By: Jeff Kaiser</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeff Kaiser</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Aug 2009 11:34:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;two tears of development&quot;....? Was it that painful to write, David? ;-)

I really look forward to hearing more about it in the future....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;two tears of development&#8221;&#8230;.? Was it that painful to write, David? <img src='http://quitmeyer.com/david/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I really look forward to hearing more about it in the future&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Les Becker of Where the Walls are Soft</title>
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		<dc:creator>Les Becker of Where the Walls are Soft</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 02 Aug 2009 04:11:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey David - found you through Twitter (thanks for the follow!).

I&#039;m totally jealous of your &quot;134 pages&quot;.  The first draft of my first screenplay finished up at TWO HUNDRED AND SIXTY ODD.  Three rewrites later (over 6 years, mind you), I still can&#039;t seem to trim it down below 150 or thereabouts.  I don&#039;t think it will EVER find itself in the hands of anybody that will actually read the thing.

Chronic Script Bloat.  That&#039;s a real disease, you know.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey David &#8211; found you through Twitter (thanks for the follow!).</p>
<p>I&#8217;m totally jealous of your &#8220;134 pages&#8221;.  The first draft of my first screenplay finished up at TWO HUNDRED AND SIXTY ODD.  Three rewrites later (over 6 years, mind you), I still can&#8217;t seem to trim it down below 150 or thereabouts.  I don&#8217;t think it will EVER find itself in the hands of anybody that will actually read the thing.</p>
<p>Chronic Script Bloat.  That&#8217;s a real disease, you know.</p>
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